Problem-Solution Essay Draft 2

With the recent rise of many social media platforms, it is of no surprise that social media addiction is fast becoming a problem. People with this problem tend to have a compulsive urge to surf social media excessively, to the extent that it affects their daily activities. According to an info graphic compiled by Go-Globe in 2014, there are 2.03 billion active social media users worldwide and that is a 28% global penetration. In Singapore, one of the most wired places in the world, there is a 62% active social media penetration in 2014. This figure is more than double the global penetration. Focusing on youths of ages 15 to 35, a study by Singapore Polytechnic has shown that they spend at least 5 hours a day online on average. It is easy to see how this amount of time can spiral out of control. Even more shocking is the fact that many are unaware that they are even addicted. Currently, there are treatments to help people kick their addiction to social media. However, prevention is better than cure. To prevent social media addiction amongst youths, the root cause must first be tackled and this can be done by having the Ministry of Communications and Information (MCI) and the Ministry of Education (MOE) collaborating in educating the youths.

Addiction to social media can be attributed to the release of dopamine, a chemical neurotransmitter associated with motivation and reward response in the human brain, whenever we receive and answer a notification. However, this instant gratification comes with more dire effects than expected for youths. It is affecting them in various aspects of life. Since youths are still schooling, being addicted to social media takes a hit on their grades. They are so fixated on checking for updates that their attention span decreases, making it hard to concentrate on their work or during lessons. It is ironic that social media were created to connect us easier, but in fact, it has isolated us from the real world and has made us lonelier than ever. Youths who are addicted to social media often have the illusion that online interaction equates to a real relationship. Some even deem it to be of greater importance than face-to-face interaction. These youths are more prone to being transfixed in the virtual world, thereby straining their familial ties and friendships. Self-esteem issues are also a concern for those addicted. It was found that youths who spent more time online experienced more frequent feelings of inadequacy due to constant comparison with their peers on social media.

The Singaporean government has identified that social media addiction can be a serious problem amongst youths. Currently, there are two counselling centres available that help with all forms of digital addiction. They are the National Addictions Management Services (NAMS) and TOUCH Community Services. Their services range from helplines, counselling sessions and education campaigns. The counselling sessions provided by NAMS seem to be very comprehensive. Not only do they have a clinic that specialises in adolescents, they also have a well-rounded team consisting of professional counsellors, psychiatrists, psychologists, family therapists and medical social workers. Youths addicted to social media have very high chances of recovery when exposed to such an extensive treatment. On the other hand, TOUCH Community Services focus on awareness campaigns pertaining to different education levels under their TOUCH Cyber Wellness. These campaigns are highly interactive and tailored to the needs of specific age groups, making them effective in grabbing students’ attention.

Despite these existing services, the main problem remains that youths do not even know the signs and symptoms of social media addiction to realize that they need such treatments. Other than those who are forced by their parents to go for counselling, many youths that are in need of help are still oblivious as to how social media addiction is affecting them. They deem their behaviour to be the norm of their generation, since everyone around them seems to be doing so too. Even though there are education programmes by TOUCH Cyber Wellness that are implemented in school to create awareness among youths, their curriculums are mostly centered around problems like gaming addiction and cyber-bullying rather than social media addiction. This is why there needs to be a collaboration between MCI and MOE to come up with a more versatile awareness campaign that focuses on the traits and impacts of social media addiction so that youths can better identify themselves and take charge of their treatment. They can then recover from their addiction faster since they voluntarily went for counseling instead of being forced to do so.

In conclusion, social media addiction is an emerging problem that impedes the growth of our youths. It is a 21^st Century issue that needs to be solved before it evolves into something even more menacing, and the best way to do so would be by having a cooperation between MCI and MOE to create awareness of the issue amongst youths.  

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